Issue 01red - Page 26
JustNoPoint on March 26, 2018
A little behind the scenes DVD commentary on this page.
I had intended to make this a 2 page thing. By having Rick text Fenny all night long and showing time pass by with him in his room over the night. But just this small start of an exchange took up a whole page by itself. So I decided to just do the 1 page and only show the start of the conversation.
I had no real idea how I could make a texting scene from only 1 POV look interesting.
I have no idea if I succeeded or not :P
I hope I did!
Szyszka666 at 10:50AM, March 30, 2015
Text message conversations are not that easy to show in my opinion. At least not in an original way. I think this page looks really good and the time stamps were a good idea :)
Whirlwynd at 6:51PM, March 27, 2015
I like this conversation. Aside from the superpowers, it seems very natural =)
JustNoPoint at 11:31AM, March 26, 2015
Vickie: I was hoping the time stamps could display a bit of subtlety too. Like when a character pauses a bit before answering.---- Tupapayon: I assumed your sexy voice transcended typical means!
tupapayon at 8:43AM, March 26, 2015
I've tried texting with a sexy voice… didn't work…
usedbooks at 7:51AM, March 26, 2015
Everyone knows dead parents cause superpowers. Fact. (The page works well. Time stamps were a good addition.)