Issue One Page One

ragles on Nov. 12, 2009

I said I wasn't going to colour them, but… I had to xD


Anyway. Is that text okay? And… is that last panel confusing at all? Gah I have so many questions!! CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM WELCOME!?!!

Yeah. I like the first and second panel. Although, the lighting is kind of retarded. LOL. I can't do orange lighting on people, sorry.

Aw, shit I forgot to do the fucking sign on the bus. >_> Pretend that that has the number 6 and a street name on it…