1- The Beginning
The_Pwnsome on Dec. 19, 2007
Well, I worked extra-hard so I could give you guys all something that wasn't just a title-page. For Assisstants, you must either have your own comic or give me an example of your work, you know the drill.
The_Pwnsome at 2:24PM, Dec. 21, 2007
Thanks for the criticism, you guys. I'll work on the text bubbles a little bit for the next episode/issue/whatever and make the overall size of the comic larger, but I like the look of different sized panels..
Lukas Kirkby at 11:53PM, Dec. 20, 2007
1. Use rounded rectangles for your speechbubbles. 2. Keep your frames the same size(and slightly bigger too). This makes your comic look a lot more organised.
Arc at 5:32PM, Dec. 20, 2007
Thisn't isn't too bad, however your panels are a tad too small. Try and make them a bit bigger in future. Also, have you ever read the comic "Bob And George"? If so, try and make your speechbubble tails the same way they are made for "Bob And George" but make sure the actual buble is a rounded rectangle. Good luck in future!
Hunter_Fusion at 5:18PM, Dec. 20, 2007
Awsome comic!