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Avart on May 10, 2017
Next morning, Hitomi stays in home. She listened Hayate's advice about the clothes, and the kitten pijama was replaced for… well, you're seeing it right now. She doesn't leave anything to the imagination.
BTW, the text boxes in the bottom panel reads:
1-top right
2-bottom right
3-top left
4-bottom left
Thank you for reading, you're the best!
thunderdavid at 7:48PM, May 17, 2017
yea, that last panel is drawn well. I love it. She get's the text 9 am in the morning? but the text messaging comes off like it's 'past tense'. Maybe I'm wrong on this.
Avart at 9:03PM, May 21, 2017
You're right! I've fixed the page, thanks!
Fantasticbrick at 4:09PM, May 13, 2017
You draw Hitomi so beautifully. Even just the art on the phone is on a master level.
Avart at 9:31PM, May 13, 2017
Thanks! Making that phone was so boring, I really appreciate your comment :D
GuyWithChainsaw at 4:40AM, May 12, 2017
That bed pose is drawn beautifully. I liked kitten pijama though :P
Avart at 6:11PM, May 12, 2017
Thanks! Sorry about the pijama, but at least she conserve the bunny bed sheets XD (though, it's a very difficult to see it)
KimLuster at 6:11AM, May 11, 2017
Uh Oh Kokoro's coming over - let's hope Hitomi gets dressed before then... or not! ;) That is some great foreshortening in that bottom panel! And neato what you did with the text boxes and emojis!!
Avart at 7:26PM, May 11, 2017
Thanks! Making the last panel was a headache, mainly to obtain an adequate proportion. I was trying to use cellphone screenshots for the text boxes, but... maybe later I'll try it again XD