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Avart on June 11, 2017
Kokoro (literally) flees from Hitomi. The street is terribly dark, fortunately, her department is very close.
Speaking of streets, draw it was a pain. I don't know what happens to me and I don't know why I chose this perspective, but I think that it was worth :D
Seriously, from my (not twisted) own perspective, things will get better and more intense from now on. I've decided to make changes (mainly add chapters) to the story which as for today, I've finished all the pages but I'm not very comfortable with the way things are flowing (all happens too fast) and I'll try to give it a more paced rythm. This is because, as I told you before (I think I did), The Gloom was intended as a “one shot”, so I need to set the ideas on paper, but after 9 months I've realized that this could be at least twice as bigger.
So, I'll be publishing pages at the same rythm for at least 2+ months and there's more extra chapters :D
Thanks for reading, you're the best once again!
TuSense at 10:24PM, June 20, 2017
Amazing perspective for the background!
thunderdavid at 8:16AM, June 16, 2017
That's thing about stories and characters, they evolved as you go. And some times too fast.
KimLuster at 6:50AM, June 13, 2017
Oh no...! I feel a big sense of dread!! I hope Kokoro doesn't meet a dark fate!! You're perspective and vanishing points really bring the tension... I'm glad to hear you're considering making this bigger!
GuyWithChainsaw at 1:24PM, June 11, 2017
That's a really cool perspective, the street looks eerie and creepy. I can tell things gonna go horrory