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KimLuster on Sept. 18, 2012

Not sure how ‘real’ my ‘gangsta’ talk is, but I am trying to keep this teen-rated. And I do personally know people that talk an awful lot like this…
Bottom left panel, I'm guilty of having the ‘gangstas’ employ the secret move to overpower any female. ( http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/StandardFemaleGrabArea) My bad :)

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tommym at 8:37AM, Oct. 23, 2015

Dera KimLuster is dream sequence lucid ? lucicitt dream?once as I in dream walking eastward subway near museum of natural history:) tommym

plymayer at 9:55AM, Sept. 24, 2012

Your doing a good job conveying mood and intent. I tend to over do it with the guessing....

KimLuster at 7:14AM, Sept. 24, 2012

Well, she's of the mindset that she must 'overcome' something and wants to be aggressive about it. That, mixed with a bit of frustration... This character is never going to do everything the 'Right Way'. If it's confusing, it looks like I need to get better at conveying the mood and intent...

plymayer at 8:23PM, Sept. 23, 2012

Hhmmm.... Went back and looked at the last page. They did look threatening. But who knows? Probably best to be ready for anything but assume nothing. Running away is always better than getting hurt. Since this is a dream, perhaps things are there to teach.

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