KimLuster at 10:18AM, Feb. 21, 2014

@fallopiancrusader: Thanks! I'll try to stop worrying haha

fallopiancrusader at 6:57AM, Feb. 21, 2014

Sure, the page is dense, but it works just fine. It's a well choreographed emotional interplay.

KimLuster at 2:45PM, Feb. 20, 2014

@Peipei: Haha you're close! But Kimber Lee plans to do something involving jumping - we know how those have tended to turn out haha

KimLuster at 2:44PM, Feb. 20, 2014

@Banes: Awesome! Well in that case I'll quit overly worrying about 'packed' pages, but I'll still generally work on letting the art itself do more of the talking. Thanks for the feedback - it really is appreciated!

Peipei at 1:45PM, Feb. 20, 2014

Lol! I love how Socorro is almost entertained at all of this. I wonder what Kimber plans to do in order to convince her that she's telling the truth. Is she gonna do a triple back flip or something? :s

Banes at 12:30PM, Feb. 20, 2014

I don't think it comes across badly at all! The emotions ring true and it's a total page-turner. It's probably my favorite dramatic comic. And this one sees these two confronting each other at last, and ends in a great way, anticipating Kim's demonstration and Socorro's reaction!

KimLuster at 8:19AM, Feb. 20, 2014

@Banes: Well, I did want feedback... If the page came across in a bad way because it was too 'packed'. I was a bit worried it would but if it doesn't then I'm fine with it. I know I wanted Socorro to be a little frustrated with Kimber Lee for not being 'totally' truthful, and calling her out for making up 'outrageous' stories seemed a good way - plus it sets up the next couple panels (and the next page). Still, I do feel I need to learn to let the art do the talking more instead of so much text... Grrrr it's not easy!

Banes at 8:07AM, Feb. 20, 2014

I think the fact that Socorro is coming to talk to her, even though she's coming across as angry, is a good sign. The wall is broken down...that's how wounds get healed! Did you want feedback on the packed-page thing? You could've axed that dialogue where Kim tells Socorro about the dream experiment stuff; just have her go right into the demonstration of her abilities. Another beauty of a page...the characters' behavior continues to make sense and be very believable!

KimLuster at 5:13AM, Feb. 20, 2014

@plymayer: True enough! Not like her tactics so far have worked all that well ;)

KimLuster at 5:12AM, Feb. 20, 2014

@Bravo1102: Yeah Socorro's become quite the contrary one. As for as the washed out, I thought the other pages didn't look enough like Night, so I tried to mute the colors somewhat. I try in the coming pages as well, with varying success.

plymayer at 4:54AM, Feb. 20, 2014

Good idea. She needs to trust some one. Her old friend will be true.

bravo1102 at 4:51AM, Feb. 20, 2014

Socorro is so negative that if Kimber Lee can sell her, she can sway anyone. Important test. The color's more washed out than last page. Moon going behind a cloud probably.