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KimLuster on March 12, 2015
Jack gave in mighty quickly…! Interesting… Will there be any ramifications? In light of what's happening, does it really matter? Two pages left in chapter and we won't stay ignorant for long :D Stay plugged in!!
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Please check out my Godstrain Extras and see the awesome images of Kimber Lee that've been submitted by others for the Fashion Show!
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I've got a bit of a backlog so I'll take a small break from the Godstrain and contribute a bit to the Fashion Show, and also make a one-pager for the Mary Sue contest!
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Thanks for Reading Everyone!
KimLuster at 1:32PM, March 17, 2015
@Strix: Yeah you got it plenty :)
strixvanallen at 12:58PM, March 17, 2015
@KimLuster I guess I got it enough. XD I goes as "woman tries to solve by herself the eon-old philosophic mystery of what defines reality and the moral implications of it", or something like that. xD Personally, I don't feel anxious to know if she is dreaming or awake because what interests me more in this story is another thing: even if this is a dream and Kimber Lee never did anything to any "real" human being, will she be able to live with herself after the decisions she has to make? Will she live with herself normally after she learns ugly truths about herself, like the fact that she could kill people if she knew that there wouldn't be consequences (emotional or physical) to her? This is far more interesting to me.
KimLuster at 8:34AM, March 17, 2015
@strixvanallen: lol... Okay! I've had many nights like that :D... So are you saying you 'sorta' understand what the story is about now? By design it's supposed to be a little confusing. The entire thing is from Kimber Lee's perspective, and she (thus the reader) often didn't know if she was dreaming or not, what was real or not! She's concluded she's not dreaming (for the moment), but that was just a determined choice to do so - she (thus the reader) still doesn't really 'know'... It's maddening, I know, but I'm inspired by some great stories that do the same (the Matrix, Inception...) :D In any case I really appreciate you taking the time to read my story - I know it can be a slog at time (I'm wordy) ;)
strixvanallen at 8:10AM, March 17, 2015
@KimLuster: My problem when I did this comment was that I started reading your comic a little before midnight and obsessively read it until 4 a.m. By that time, I guess I was sleep-drunk, judging by how little sense my comment made. xD (The Duck doesn't mark it as posted at 4 a.m. because I'm not in the same timezone as you, but yeah, that was the time when I posted it. Lucky that I don't have to work on Tuesday mornings.) I guess that saying that I liked the comic is moot at this point. XD
KimLuster at 4:18AM, March 17, 2015
@Ghosty: I think that's the plan!!
KimLuster at 4:17AM, March 17, 2015
@strixvanallen: Thank you for reading the whole thing! And in one sitting - wow!! What problem are you having? I'll try to help!
ghostrunner at 1:52AM, March 17, 2015
cover it with gas and set it on fire :D
strixvanallen at 11:57PM, March 16, 2015
...Help. I've read from page one to here in one sitting. I have som many problems, I can't even. ._.
KimLuster at 4:18AM, March 16, 2015
@Banes: Thank You! Yeah it surprised me too - really!! :D
Banes at 7:49PM, March 15, 2015
Excellent angles, especially the dramatic upshot on Kim and the wide shots right after! This move from Kim surprised me! I wondered what she was up to when she took out her guards on the last page...veeeeeeerrrry innnnnteresting! Lovin' it! Just lovin' it!
KimLuster at 8:48PM, March 14, 2015
@Peipei: Yeah she certainly called his bluff and took charge...! ;)
Peipei at 8:03PM, March 14, 2015
Lol I love how he's trying his damndest to get her to stop (even with useless bluffs, haha!) Since when has Kimber Lee ever played by the rules anyway :p? I think you better let her handle this one dude if you know what's good for you...
KimLuster at 5:52AM, March 14, 2015
@skyangel: Thanks! Yeah, I've kept each chapter at 24 pages and my OCD won't let me waver from it! :D At the end of this one we'll probably be hanging a wee bit! ;)
skyangel at 3:25AM, March 14, 2015
Sooo only two pages to the end of the chapter...and I feel we are gonna be left with a very big cliffhanger somehow!!! I love the angle on Kim in that second panel, that must have been tough but you've made a great job of her. Can't wait for the next page !
KimLuster at 4:35PM, March 13, 2015
@Bravo: Thanks so much! Next Page - Ever Luvin' Blue-eyed Biggs' Button-pushin' Time!
bravo1102 at 3:53PM, March 13, 2015
Great use of perspective. And those two reaction panels say much without dialogue. Go for it Biggs! Give Eli that Hellfire missile enema! Actually when I read that I thought "It's clobbering time!" and wondered what the reaction would be if the Fantastic Four's ever-luvin' Blue-eyed Thing came out to cut Eli down to size.
KimLuster at 11:27AM, March 13, 2015
Typos corrected...! Thanks for spotting them! And please don't hesitate to point them out in the future...!
KimLuster at 11:22AM, March 13, 2015
@FC: Thanks...! And wow I kept looking...and looking... and never saw those typos...! I'll fix 'em shortly
fallopiancrusader at 10:08AM, March 13, 2015
Great viewpoint in panel 2! I think these are typos: Panel 3: "I" should be "a" Panel 4: "broke" should be "broken" and "won't" should be "want"
KimLuster at 9:51AM, March 13, 2015
@Tom: I wished I'd named my chapters from the beginning - that's awesome!
Call Me Tom at 9:09AM, March 13, 2015
Next time Gods Vs Monsters!
KimLuster at 8:47AM, March 13, 2015
@tupapayon: I always want typos pointed out - but I got my blind eyes on...! Where's the typo exactly...?
tupapayon at 8:13AM, March 13, 2015
Rules of the game are changing… hate to point out… *ahem*typos*…
KimLuster at 7:05AM, March 13, 2015
@plymayer: Jack is a calculator...!
plymayer at 6:56AM, March 13, 2015
He's got a winning situation here. If she takes care of him he'll grab the credit. If not, he'll blame her.