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KimLuster on May 25, 2015
First panel I figured Kimber Lee would have to bust thru some glass panels as she worked her way thru building - she probably should've closed her eyes… 4th panel perspective is off - Kimber Lee is way too big even when she's supposed to just look closer… Oh well…
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Story-wise I've slowed down but I'm not stopping - hope you all stick around…
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Thanks for reading everyone!
strixvanallen at 7:28PM, May 25, 2015
Hi! My name is Strix and I'm quietly waiting for the next page. Quietly!
tupapayon at 6:43PM, May 25, 2015
Yes Kimber Lee, the secret is to know how to ask...
KimLuster at 6:29PM, May 25, 2015
@cdmalcolm: Thank You! Well she thinks she's sure... like that makes any sense!!
KimLuster at 6:26PM, May 25, 2015
@Sway: Wow! Thank you! I'll certainly take those words to heart...!! :D
cdmalcolm1 at 6:13PM, May 25, 2015
Sure she's not going infect her family? She is exposed. We will see. Nice art as always.
Sway at 6:00PM, May 25, 2015
Wonderful work as always. And you know, I wouldn't worry too much about the technical stuff like having Kimber Lee close her eyes. Or even perspective, for that matter. I know a lot of people like to put stock into how technically "correct" comic art is, but I consider coherent, effective sequencing to be far more important. How is a page paced? How does it flow? Is the information clear to the reader? All that's working just fine, here. So I wouldn't be too hard on yourself. And I'll definitely be sticking around!