One advice for the speech bubbles, make the boarder thinner cause it distracts readers to look at the boarders rather then look at the text. Also try to make sure no text is touching the edges of the bubble, it gives a cleaner look on comic speech bubbles. Other then that good work and i'll keep looking out for improvement :)
Zerolimits at 9:33PM, June 15, 2010
One advice for the speech bubbles, make the boarder thinner cause it distracts readers to look at the boarders rather then look at the text. Also try to make sure no text is touching the edges of the bubble, it gives a cleaner look on comic speech bubbles. Other then that good work and i'll keep looking out for improvement :)
Kaolyne at 7:23PM, June 2, 2010
Did she call her Sis? 0_0