#41, A Goddess?!
Mettuar_Hunter on Dec. 6, 2006
Oooh, the plot's getting in depth O_o.
I know the bubbles aren't like the usual ones, but this one is WAY too text heavy to use my normal kind. The bubbles would look HORRIBLE if they were the circular bubbles, so… yeah.
I've actually been looking forward to this part since I started the comic. It's kind've like the end of the tutorial in Kingdom Hearts. The hero is soon to leave, weapon in hand.
Oh, and one last thing. I want to ask a favor of you all. Don't hold back on ANYTHING you see wrong in the comic. I want to be the best I can be with this comic… and how can I when I don't get any critique? Just as a favor to me, OK?
Mettuar_Hunter at 7:47PM, Dec. 8, 2006
THANK YOU MAN! You rock. Well, the only thing I have an answer for is the backgrounds... they'll stop after this small arc. Everything else, I'll be working on for sure :)
LowResAtari at 7:43PM, Dec. 8, 2006
I must say, I like your textboxes. I wish I had the patience to do mine that way. The backgrounds kinda irk me because they're kinda... waaaay too detailed compared to the characters. At this point, the sword seems to have not had much of a purpose to me... so that may need a little clarification. Also... the Goddess needs boobs... Goddesses are supposed to have better ones than everyone else. It's not that I have a dirty mind or anything, but she just doesn't seem too Godly without them for some reason o.O I like the way the story is heading, and I'm anticipating the next page to see what's going to happen. That's a good thing :D Anyway... you wanted a no holds barred review on this page, and there you have it. ALL YOU OTHER PEOPLE READING THIS COMIC NEED TO DO THE SAME :D
SailorPoison at 9:03AM, Dec. 7, 2006
Anyone who protects the cute and cuddly must be good