Yeesh, I agree, text boxes and capitalization would be a godsend. You don't appear to be a horrid sprite comic, and there IS humour, so I'll rate this a 5.
Right, i thank you for telling me how to improve (no sarcasm), but next time leave the little anonymous box unchecked. For all we know you could be a hypocrite, i should hope you know what one is?
anonymous
at 1:10PM, Jan. 17, 2006
You see that key on your keyboard, right under capslock on the left, and the enter key on the right. It has either "Shift" or a little up arrow on it. Hold that down for the first letter of every new setance. I know it's a lot of effort, but you have to start somewhere.
Once you get the hang of that, try adding some speech bubbles. Not just recolouring copywritten sprites (practice practice that editing stuff, you'll get there.). Work on your writing a bit, look at books you enjoy reading and compare how much better they are to your comic and why.
LordCommunistFox at 12:38PM, March 13, 2006
Boring!
50nic_t43_43dg340g at 3:56PM, March 6, 2006
alot more* (Damn there should be an edit button to fix mistakes like that...)
50nic_t43_43dg340g at 3:56PM, March 6, 2006
Both of you shut up sure more more comics are better than this but its funny so get over yourselves YOUR NOT THE COMIC MAKER HERE! HE IS!
Vaati at 2:12PM, Jan. 18, 2006
Yeesh, I agree, text boxes and capitalization would be a godsend. You don't appear to be a horrid sprite comic, and there IS humour, so I'll rate this a 5.
Manix at 1:55PM, Jan. 17, 2006
Right, i thank you for telling me how to improve (no sarcasm), but next time leave the little anonymous box unchecked. For all we know you could be a hypocrite, i should hope you know what one is?
anonymous at 1:10PM, Jan. 17, 2006
You see that key on your keyboard, right under capslock on the left, and the enter key on the right. It has either "Shift" or a little up arrow on it. Hold that down for the first letter of every new setance. I know it's a lot of effort, but you have to start somewhere. Once you get the hang of that, try adding some speech bubbles. Not just recolouring copywritten sprites (practice practice that editing stuff, you'll get there.). Work on your writing a bit, look at books you enjoy reading and compare how much better they are to your comic and why.