Page 002 - RedLimb Revealed
Joystick Hero on Jan. 5, 2008
I hate the way Panel 4 looks, but I couldn't get the sprite to look right. And the transition between 5 and 6 is really rough… I'll get better at this, I promise.
EDIT: Fixed the odd text. Sorry about that.
Joystick Hero at 8:23AM, Jan. 8, 2008
I'll fix that now, then start on page 3.
crifmer at 2:02PM, Jan. 7, 2008
This is pretty interesting. I agree with the white text. I can't read it at all. Rating a 4 until it gets fixed. So there. ;) (I love the premise, though... interested to see where you're going. Good work so far.)
keithmccleary at 9:23AM, Jan. 7, 2008
Okay, first thing -- you need to change the white text. I completely missed it the first time round, went back and found it and I STILL can't read it.
Dinkleberg at 12:26PM, Jan. 6, 2008
Lol. I'm going to read this.