I don't like the chopped in half speech bubble....but the phrase "way may be the smallest bit lost" is cool. I'm going to start using it. (Yes, I envisage myself getting lost enough to use that, what of it?)
Your owl is the cutest thing ever. :D
I love this dialogue so much - it's fun to read, and character-driven, not just stock phrases.
One thing that bothers me is the fact that Matthew's last speech bubble is obscured by the panel border - it doesn't make it unreadable, but it does look kind of annoying.
tammster at 1:14PM, March 2, 2010
That owl is just the cutest little thing ever.
harkovast at 3:41PM, Sept. 23, 2009
I don't like the chopped in half speech bubble....but the phrase "way may be the smallest bit lost" is cool. I'm going to start using it. (Yes, I envisage myself getting lost enough to use that, what of it?)
SplicerParade at 4:31AM, Aug. 29, 2009
Your owl is the cutest thing ever. :D I love this dialogue so much - it's fun to read, and character-driven, not just stock phrases. One thing that bothers me is the fact that Matthew's last speech bubble is obscured by the panel border - it doesn't make it unreadable, but it does look kind of annoying.
Redemption at 6:41PM, March 15, 2009
Wow. Thanks, DAJB! I'm an old fan of Shades so I appreciate that a lot from you. I hope it can live up to those intial impressions. ;)
DAJB at 1:53AM, March 15, 2009
A nice start. Lovely artwork. Looking forward to seeing where the story goes.