dragonsong12 at 6:06PM, Feb. 10, 2015

You are absolutely right on that one. I knew there was something off about it, but I couldn't place what it was. Thank you! Slowly inching towards success! I'll get there. :D

Mina_Lunga at 3:02PM, Feb. 10, 2015

Well, he WAS aiming for the eye slits, at least! It was his best shot. I agree with ejb on the action, but the shirt in the second-to-last panel looks strangely elastic. If it is being yanked up and deformed, having the shoulder be straight and the shoulder seam in place is odd.

dragonsong12 at 8:18AM, Feb. 10, 2015

Yeah, something has to be said for the guy who turns, sees the big guy in armor and immediately thinks to himself, "yeah, I can take him with my knife." You gotta give him some points for bravery. And thanks! foreshortening is still something I have difficulty with, I have some issues with the panel in question as well, but I'm glad it came across okay!

ejb at 4:38PM, Feb. 9, 2015

Well he gave a noble effort, I suppose. Good action on these pages. The panel with the knife coming at us is really cool. Now all we need is 3-D specs.