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EmoGrl on Aug. 4, 2009
Made these for friend…
at 5:25PM, June 13, 2011
o_o i left this account like.... 2 years ago o___o
at 10:27PM, Aug. 10, 2009
Oh yeah, I forgot to add on as well, if you need guidance in making Customs or whatever, my forums have a good tutorial for doing so. Go to AL and check it out if you wish!
at 10:25PM, Aug. 10, 2009
You asked for my assistance, so after a long hiatus I'm back.
For how long? Dunno.
Anywho, my little thing of your comic?
Pretty good, for a Sonic comic.
1. More custom/edit sprites are needed, the less they look like the originals the better.
2. Use normal black text and outline your boxes accordingly, then use tails to connect them to who says them (don't make either of those cover your characters!)
3. Self-Portrayals are overdone, sorry. I suggest you get an original character (Take Lucas Buchanon or Alex Legend, or any of my characters for that fact, none of them are real people or actual characters from a game).
This is just a pointer, it's your choice to follow it or not: Using actual game characters from Sonic etc. isn't such a good thing, having your own is better.
That's all! Your comic has no serious flaws, not like most on DD, and that's a great thing. Grammar and Spelling is great, way to go!
I really only truly suggest changing some small things in your comic, or than that, keep at it!
A five from yours truly, since you did so well for a beginner!