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E1P2: Introductions (pt2)

ozzy1181 on Oct. 31, 2009

UPADTE:
So yeah, page two has been updated also… now with mugshots and text boxes, no bitmix, no jepg and some order to the panles… but whats this? something not yet seen befor… a mugshot for Banner!? i dint know if i'd get chance to use this (or untill episode 5 when banner has a bigger role than in episode 2,3 and 4…)

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Introducing the Main character, Josh young; a poor, sarcastic teenager… and Banner Spanner, the local Chav leader

USB: A new thing Iâ€™m trying, hope you like it. Iâ€™m not much of a spriter… I usually tend to film live action videos (available on YouTube, search ozzy1181)

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ozzy1181 at 11:04PM, Oct. 29, 2010

yeah, banners been being a dick again... his mum asks aout it in page 3...

necrolichmon at 10:55PM, Oct. 29, 2010

is he bleeding or something on this page? just wondering what the stuff on his cheek is.

TBustah at 8:59PM, Nov. 1, 2009

Not much of a spriter? Yeah, sorry to be blunt, but at least you're being honest with yourself. Really, though, I've seen a lot worse. Your two biggest problems are sprite resizing (you need to do it by percentage, so that they don't get distorted), and your panels (they're inconsistent in size and sloppily spaced). You should also work on those text bubbles. I'm assuming that you're using MS Paint, because they're so pixelated. You need to be using Photoshop or Paint.net, the line tools are a lot better. There are a lot of other issues, but let's see if you can fix the ones I've already pointed out before I spend any more time trying to correct you.

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E1P2: Introductions (pt2)

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