Ch.1, Prt 2, pg. 3
Tempest_Lavalle on Nov. 19, 2010
Skipped a week cause I got behind in some school stuff. I really didn't like drawing the hospital room. Mostly because I wanted to make sure it was identified as one, so I used reference and it was a pain in the patella to get it to where I liked it XI
Otherwise, I'm happy with this page. I've learned about glow effects from these last 3 pages then I've learned in the past couple years messing with photoshop XD
The comments from the last page seriously had me laughing SO hard XD It's always fun to see what people speculate/joke about when new secrets are revealed :3
I've never been hospitalized (knock on wood!) but my sister has been. And even though her injuries weren't as severe as we feared, she looked like HELL lying in that damn bed. Poor Sarah :C
Also, look! Sarah's little brother is here!
Abt_Nihil at 10:12AM, Nov. 21, 2010
You did a great job at establishing the location... I hate hospitals :/
rmccool at 5:43AM, Nov. 21, 2010
very nice.. yep hospitals are never fun no matter what side of the bed we are on
AzuJOD at 5:57PM, Nov. 20, 2010
The glow effects are great, and that last panel is very moving! :)
LuchaCoffee at 6:31AM, Nov. 20, 2010
Nice job, I'm sure her mom and brother were prolly worried sick :C
fukujinzuke at 11:20PM, Nov. 19, 2010
You did a great job with the glow effects! And, yes, you definitely established the hospital room very clearly.
aqua 77 at 11:18PM, Nov. 19, 2010
waking up sucks often enough as it is, waking up in a hospital, after meeting the man of just enough exposition to let you figure out something weird is going on, but not enough to know what, why or how, must really suck on a brand new level. although thats only if she doesn't dismiss it as a electrification induced dream.