The basis is to know you did something wrong (I would say something nicer to make you feel better, but you would propably stab me through the Internet).
Writter comment:
I tried to show on this page what mental state Paladin is right now. I think I nailed it down, that he isn't very happy, to put it lightly, but from perspective, last box comes out a little silly. Okay, not a little. It makes all of this internal monologue sound less serious, instead of the opposite. Maybye using swear to make an emphasis on his words wasn't such a good idea?
God of War at 1:00PM, March 16, 2011
The basis is to know you did something wrong (I would say something nicer to make you feel better, but you would propably stab me through the Internet). Writter comment: I tried to show on this page what mental state Paladin is right now. I think I nailed it down, that he isn't very happy, to put it lightly, but from perspective, last box comes out a little silly. Okay, not a little. It makes all of this internal monologue sound less serious, instead of the opposite. Maybye using swear to make an emphasis on his words wasn't such a good idea?