Blank Life Insert Player Rokulily
Salsa on July 27, 2010
Well We both liked it, although I never did get his part of the art, his revisions on the script, or his favorite page. Here's mine. I might play too much mafia.
Agree, disagree, rant and rave in the forum
Next week we review The Drunk Duck Mafia.
Edit: Actually he did I just missed it because it was on the account I didn't use to email him with. I apologize about that and will try and prevent a SNAFU like this from happening again.
Hunchdebunch at 9:37AM, July 31, 2010
I like the layout, especially that you included bit of the comic, as that gets the points you make across much better, and gives the artist more publicity at the same time. So, everyone's a winner! :D
Bocaj at 9:33PM, July 30, 2010
I liek that you changed the format from copying TWCRCOTW. Including a strip you are reviewing in the actual image is a nice way to also let the readers form their opinions.
I Am The 1337 Master at 4:54AM, July 29, 2010
Thing is, even I enjoy Rokulily's art.
Genejoke at 12:22AM, July 29, 2010
It is good that you have changed the layout, be interesting to see how it works with both of you on board.
BffSatan at 11:10PM, July 28, 2010
I actually prefer this layout to Hark and Kev's since you can actually give examples of what you're talking about in-comic.
Niccea at 7:07PM, July 28, 2010
Technically another of Roku's is next week. She is a very good contributor to The Drunk Duck Mafia.
rokulily at 5:06PM, July 28, 2010
yay i didn't get maimed! which you already informed me that i wouldn't but still. also i am glads that you like my comic so yes, good review!
usedbooks at 12:56PM, July 28, 2010
Thanks for taking your own approach to the format. :) It looks nice and clean, and none of the blocks of text are too long (good paragraph lengths, and legible font). As for the review. I like it. It's concise and to the point but also specific about why you like what you like. I haven't read Rokulily's comic myself, but it looks charming, and I might have to check it out.
Asbin at 12:50PM, July 28, 2010
yep you did Salsa. And yeah... It's impossible to have less text in a review comic.
Salsa at 10:50AM, July 28, 2010
Glad you guys like it. Normally Monkey and I would be having a conversation about the comic, but I didn't get his email in time. So you have me doing it by myself. I think that's one reason that it seems like there's too much text. On of the goals was to avoid having a lot of small text in big blocks, I think I succeeded in that regard.
Product Placement at 10:27AM, July 28, 2010
It's a review comic, same. It's kinda difficult to do a review without having some text in it. 5 for fully agreeing with the review.
same at 10:22AM, July 28, 2010
Starting to look better. Although too much text. -1 for there being too much to read. Why does everyone just either give a five or not rate?
Asbin at 10:07AM, July 28, 2010
Digging the new layout. Much less annoying to the eyes! Just about everything negative anybody had to say with the previous is probably gonna be taken back on this one. Keep it up!