put bubble tails and outline your textboxes with black, I can tell that the red text means Mario is saying it, and Luigi says the green text, have all text black, unless the color is suppost to change in the story.
We'd rather have it at page 2. or better at page 1. Why do people do that? Say: ''I'll change it at pannel whatsoever'' No, you need to change it now!!!
way too long for nothing to be happening. The boxes aren't matched up right, so they need a background or look bad.
Color coded text, again, is bad.
Really, this coulda been one or two pannels, and a slight resolution reached.
Nintendude at 1:33PM, Sept. 25, 2006
put bubble tails and outline your textboxes with black, I can tell that the red text means Mario is saying it, and Luigi says the green text, have all text black, unless the color is suppost to change in the story.
jef dam5 at 12:45PM, Sept. 25, 2006
We'd rather have it at page 2. or better at page 1. Why do people do that? Say: ''I'll change it at pannel whatsoever'' No, you need to change it now!!!
soniccomicwriter at 12:05AM, Sept. 25, 2006
I will change it in page 4
theduckofanime at 11:17PM, Sept. 24, 2006
way too long for nothing to be happening. The boxes aren't matched up right, so they need a background or look bad. Color coded text, again, is bad. Really, this coulda been one or two pannels, and a slight resolution reached.
lefarce at 10:01PM, Sept. 24, 2006
Why is there a giant black void?