(You do not *suck* at backgrounds)
Though I'd first like to note that your perspective in the first panel is borderline between good, and needing work. Mainly the thing that stands out is that the perspective of the background doesn't fit the perspective of the table. (Again, I do this too sometimes. Don't mind me.)
Then I'd like to say that this page made me smile. It's cute, put simply. It just, really is. More examples of your good character design, and sequence here.
One small complaint is that I have difficulty reading the 'lose weight' bit, I realize why you made it smaller, and also I'm slightly blind. So there's that.
The last panel is SO typical anime, and yet, it's positively adorable. So you pull it off well, yes indeed.
Ruka E Pocky at 2:43PM, March 8, 2006
(You do not *suck* at backgrounds) Though I'd first like to note that your perspective in the first panel is borderline between good, and needing work. Mainly the thing that stands out is that the perspective of the background doesn't fit the perspective of the table. (Again, I do this too sometimes. Don't mind me.) Then I'd like to say that this page made me smile. It's cute, put simply. It just, really is. More examples of your good character design, and sequence here. One small complaint is that I have difficulty reading the 'lose weight' bit, I realize why you made it smaller, and also I'm slightly blind. So there's that. The last panel is SO typical anime, and yet, it's positively adorable. So you pull it off well, yes indeed.