Prologue Page 13
iowabarbidoll on Oct. 28, 2007
Ah yes, let's end the chapter the way we began, with a bit of blood. MWHA HA HA!
Well, happy things are happening in XYlialand, and scary crazy things in Barbland. More details coming, but one thing to watch for is a donation challenge button that could get more Xylia pages happening! Two a week! Maybe three! WOO HOO! What say ye to that?
Or maybe we should just leave whoever is bleeding in the rain where he is…
Ya think?
As always, thank you to everyone who comments, I read everyone's comments and appreciate all of your visits so much. Hope you continue to enjoy Xylia. Now the story starts.
^_^
~B
gina_biggs at 12:33PM, Nov. 4, 2007
Your work is absolutely gorgeous. I am envious of your background work. ^_^
Jerle at 9:52AM, Nov. 1, 2007
>.> All you new people need to join the forum so it can be more active!!! There's free cookies in it for you all...
iowabarbidoll at 9:50AM, Oct. 31, 2007
Happy Halloween!! Thank you everyone for visiting! I hope you enjoyed this cliff hanger of sorts. Blood always tends to stir up a bit of concern, doesn't it? Wow, thank you again for the comments! FLAMEN T- Now, if I told you what happened,- would you come back?!! ^_- SOLI- That is the question of the day when it comes to Charlie. IS it real? LANCE - Awesome! I would love to update more. Watch for the donation button. IF I can get folks to help, it will be a reality. WHIRLY- thank you. It's a dark creepy night. Gotta love that kind of lighting. RUBY- sorry about the blood thing. But, well you know. CLIFFHANGER! CHIP- the sight of blood get you nausated? Thank you again. I hope you get a chance to read it some day- I would love to get your opinon. IMAGINE- hmmm...I m afraid Paypal is the standard of the industry. I will look into it though. Thank you for the vote of confidence, my friend! JERLE- like I said on the forum, your comment made my day. ^_^ CHAMELEON- Thank you! Im not sure how anyone else does rain effects, so I dont know if we do them the same or not. Glad you liked the page! ^_^ MUTATION- No kidding! LADYKNIGHT- yeah. Lots o blood. Great Halloween pic! HERO & VILLAMAR- thank you for the 5's! MIDGE- thank you very much- you are way too kind! BLNTMAKER- Thank you! LORA- Thank you so much! I'm loving Dreamer by the way! Love it! MLAI- I will never tell... hee hee hee..(not as hard as you think...) TANTZ- thank you very much-I appreciate you noticing how I keep his face off camera! PURPLE PEOPLE & LITTLE TRINKS- thank you very much for visiting again! NIBBI- Thank you so much, I'm glad you found the site! TREVORA- me too- what does that say about us? MWHA HA HA *organ music starts* DREAMGAZER- Thank you again for the nice comment! ROCKSTER_ thank you! DAJB- thank you for the kind compliment- especially on the writing- that's the area Im less familar with! LIL - thank you very much- Im totally trying for the cliffhanger effect! DWIGHT- ^_^ Thank you very much! ALLANAH- thank you for stopping again- Nice job with your story, btw. It made me cry! SIMON!!! --Hello!! Thank you very much for the nice comments! LOUD G- thank you again for your kind comments, they really mean a lot! SAMARAI SKY- thank you- and thank you for visiting! Thank you again, everyone! ^_^ ~B
SamuraiSky at 12:37PM, Oct. 30, 2007
Awesome. Love the art and the story. Can't wait to see more.
Loud_G at 11:06AM, Oct. 30, 2007
Absolutely Brilliant. Great bloody hand. Great detail. Great narrative pull.
Jerle at 4:00AM, Oct. 30, 2007
Barb, your readers are multiplying. The drunkduck comment system is going to get so spammy soon, that we'll have to click through 50 pages just to read a comment.
simonitro at 9:53PM, Oct. 29, 2007
Oh No! He's got hemorrhage! What made him bleed? Anyway, beautiful scenery on panel one and great realistic dialogue going along it.
allanah at 8:20PM, Oct. 29, 2007
Oh no! He's bleeding. I really love that lil dog~
edgarallanpoo at 4:46PM, Oct. 29, 2007
DUN-DUN-DUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUN! ^_^ Well done, my friend! Dwight L. MacPherson
Lil at 3:49PM, Oct. 29, 2007
love the last panel, completely! gives good emotion and a mystery to what is to happen next!
DAJB at 3:12PM, Oct. 29, 2007
Very nice. Nice natural dialogue (well, monologue) too. Lovely work.
DreamGazer at 12:31PM, Oct. 29, 2007
That last panel looks so realistic. Awsome!
trevoramueller at 12:29PM, Oct. 29, 2007
The blood looks great. I've found that it's a lot of fun to color blood.
nibbi at 12:29PM, Oct. 29, 2007
Just stumbled on this! Awesome! It's rare you see something that's well drawn and well written.
littletrinks at 11:31AM, Oct. 29, 2007
nice page
PurplePeopleEater at 9:25AM, Oct. 29, 2007
Yay!
Tantz_Aerine at 8:55AM, Oct. 29, 2007
Great job! I love how we don't see his face at all just yet. Is this a delusion? I doubt it is. Can't wait to read up more!
mlai at 8:27AM, Oct. 29, 2007
I dread to ask: How long did it take to paste every friggin' leaf?
comic_chic at 7:48AM, Oct. 29, 2007
Beautiful first panel. Love the trees & atmospheric effects.
blntmaker at 7:39AM, Oct. 29, 2007
Love the art and ambient effects in the first panel! Great stuff!
TheMidge28 at 6:36AM, Oct. 29, 2007
"Bloody" Fantastic!!! Pun intended! No words can comment on how wonderfully rendered this scene is. quite beautiful that first panel is. The page is all the more powerful when juxtapositioned with the bottom panel. well done good lady...well done!
Ladyknight17 at 5:57AM, Oct. 29, 2007
Ahh! Blood!
Mutation at 5:16AM, Oct. 29, 2007
Wow, he misses the doctor so much now that he's bleeding. XD
Chameleon Kid at 5:03AM, Oct. 29, 2007
Oh, those're good blood effects--how'd she do that Dinky? How'd she do that? Also, great job on the rain. (I wonder if your method for rain is anything like Silentkitty's...?) I love the back-shot of him and the corgi--and just WHO would want a normal life?!--that's a nice raincoat. (love it)
Jerle at 4:16AM, Oct. 29, 2007
w00t! Xylia= The only thing good about mondays. Well, besides Chuck, Journeyman and another show I can't quite seem to remember the name of. But rest assured, Xylia makes mondays more bearable!!!