Eye stinging background's need to be fixed, your sprites are terribally resized, if you found like that, they we're horrible in the first place. Grammar, is good, horrible text boxes and horrible tail's and the hit the people joke? getting old and it's not that funny...plus I cant see navi very well so improve on these and make a better sprite comic before worser critics come with put down criticism
slimredninja at 9:24PM, Feb. 6, 2007
Great stuff Nuff said!
Shukuun at 7:31PM, Feb. 6, 2007
yea, jim is right, no offense, and who was that guy in panel 3 and 4..
jim at 7:29PM, Feb. 6, 2007
Eye stinging background's need to be fixed, your sprites are terribally resized, if you found like that, they we're horrible in the first place. Grammar, is good, horrible text boxes and horrible tail's and the hit the people joke? getting old and it's not that funny...plus I cant see navi very well so improve on these and make a better sprite comic before worser critics come with put down criticism