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Some suggestions
Ozzy McFlycoon at 8:29AM, Aug. 24, 2007
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1) I think it would help a little if Player 1 had some sort of goal or enemy. He should also get a weapon, probably a sword considering he's the main character and you like to parody things like that.

2) With the arrival of new characters you guys mentioned, I think it would be nice to organize the existing ones into groups so that the story isn't full of aimless characters. It's not there are too many characters, it's just that they are all scattered and without purpose or cause.

3) More cameos for Sean

All of these suggestions should help the quality of the comic even just maybe a little, while retaining the comedic nature of the comic.
“…for you see, Nobodies do not truly exist at all.”
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Stabby Team USA at 10:18AM, Sept. 3, 2007
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1) Quest to get amnesia/ blindly follow Steve in taking over the world. Also I always forgot to draw a sword on him so I just got rid of it.

2) We could divide them into Group of Assholes Who Hate Eachother 1 and Group of Assholes Who Hate Eachother 2 if you'd like. They'd all still be fighting eachother without reason though.

3) You're far too ugly.
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Ozzy McFlycoon at 8:10AM, Sept. 4, 2007
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Ha! But no. You've failed to dissuade me.
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Ozzy McFlycoon at 8:16AM, Sept. 4, 2007
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You haven't listed answers. You've listed reasons it needs to be improved.
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