The first sprite comic review… and we rag on it.

Harsh? Maybe. The problem is the comic fails in almost every way. I'm sure the creator could do better, especially if my assumption that he (or she) is quite young.

Meh. I didn't think you guys ragged on it all that much. This was a 5 out of 10 ragging, I'd say.

It's a polite ragging.

The spelling errors in the review came about as I typed it up in mspaint then didn't correct any mistakes. I could have tidied it up but it seemed fitting.

Really, I wanted to provide a much more balanced critique with my bit, but I couldn't really say anything good about it. I did mention that the plot formulating was a step in the right direction, but it really wasn't much of anything to say.

I do find it funny that I decided to use Madame Fatal before I read the comic, therefore finding out afterwars that I really chose a fish-out-of-water characters, as Madame Fatal is from the 40s–before TV, let alone the Internet and video games. In my opinion it works for the review, but others may think differently for all I know.

I don't know if I'll use Madame Fatal for the next review I participate in, but I really should get to reading the comics that need reviewers (and send Genejoke my information for Shades, considering I've already read it). It's just that I don't know which one to choose (especially as some, like Duke of Solitaire, will likely be just over my head as I don't really know the genre).

Not knowing the genre can be a benefit. Duke of solitaire is pretty much in hand though. Need to start looking at Lugnor riders and tales of Lugnor very soon…

I disagree, I think this is one of the most hilarious comics on DD, maybe the Earth.

I assume you were laughing at it.