If English is your first language,then you should have correct grammar and bettter spelling and this. Unless your in 3rd grade or under.
This work is terrible. The fact that you mute bad reviews means you don't care.
So in all honesty, Whay are you making this anyway?
LOL! We musta forgot both the grammar and the quality, right? Cuz all I see is horrble engrish and screencaps from Kingdom Hearts. Effort is truly AWOL on this mess.
well, lefarce im not publishing a novel for the entire world to read if i were then yeah i would check punctuation and all, and not all spelling errors are in fact spelling errors they could be merely typos, and noticew i said im good at spelling, not all elements of literature
Please tell me that's a joke. Your spelling is fine, but your punctuation is lacking. I's should be capitalized, and I'd has an apostrophe.
Considering Spelling, Punctuation and Grammar all go hand-in-hand, it's safe to say that you being a mentor to young Rats352 would only solve 1/3 of the problem (at best).
while lefarce is harsh in his quote of himself, i myself am a total spelling nerd(im a nerd at all things but especially spelling) i do have to say the spelling is quite atrocious...
what i suggesat you do is take the text to some word processor and just do a simple spell check...id even be willing to help you if you want...
Yes thank you. Muting me is a totally rational and mature thing to do. Specially since magnus911 gave you a fair review, and a score that reflect APPROVAL of the comic's overall quality.
In fact, Magnus didn't seem to have too many problems with it at all. You sir, need to change your diaper.
But oh what a wonderful tool the internet is. By selecting "back" a few times, I'm able to catch my original comment, which I will now post again for you to read...
[quote]First of all, the statement in the last panel isn't even FINISHED!
"well I gess I'll have"
Have what? Have to do a jig, have to explain the plot, have to learn how to spell?
Which brings me to my next point... I hope you're from another country, cause your spelling is abysmal.
"Gess", "Hear", "Thet", Isent"...
While "hear" was right, it wasn't correct in the context you used it in. You should have used the word "here". But fuck you, none of those words are difficult at all.
You didn't even finish the issue, and your writing makes it painfully clear that attempting to read any additional installments will result in further confusion.[/quote]
First of all, the statement in the last panel isn't even FINISHED!
"well I gess I'll have"
Have what? Have to do a jig, have to explain the plot, have to learn how to spell?
Which brings me to my next point... I hope you're from another country, cause your spelling is abysmal.
"Gess", "Hear", "Thet", Isent"...
While "hear" was right, it wasn't correct in the context you used it in. You should have used the word "here". But fuck you, none of those worlds are difficult at all.
You didn't even finish the issue, and your writing makes it painfully clear that attempting to read any additional installments will result in further confusion.
Instead of using the CoM bonus cutscenes, you could've used screenshots from the KH2 teasers/videos(www.kh-vids.net) to make it look better.
A spelling error here and there, but those can be corrected, eh?
Put "..." if you want to continue what Roxas says in the next comic. It seems like he's been cut-off mid sentence.
Quality is good, do you use Photoshop?
mishi_hime at 5:10PM, Jan. 8, 2007
If English is your first language,then you should have correct grammar and bettter spelling and this. Unless your in 3rd grade or under. This work is terrible. The fact that you mute bad reviews means you don't care. So in all honesty, Whay are you making this anyway?
shadowmaster at 10:20PM, Dec. 4, 2006
[quote]all I see is horrble engrish and screencaps from Kingdom Hearts. Effort is truly AWOL on this mess.[/quote] what he said.
Rich at 9:00PM, Dec. 4, 2006
LOL! We musta forgot both the grammar and the quality, right? Cuz all I see is horrble engrish and screencaps from Kingdom Hearts. Effort is truly AWOL on this mess.
nerdsareinvading at 8:41PM, Dec. 4, 2006
well, lefarce im not publishing a novel for the entire world to read if i were then yeah i would check punctuation and all, and not all spelling errors are in fact spelling errors they could be merely typos, and noticew i said im good at spelling, not all elements of literature
lefarce at 8:37PM, Dec. 4, 2006
Please tell me that's a joke. Your spelling is fine, but your punctuation is lacking. I's should be capitalized, and I'd has an apostrophe. Considering Spelling, Punctuation and Grammar all go hand-in-hand, it's safe to say that you being a mentor to young Rats352 would only solve 1/3 of the problem (at best).
nerdsareinvading at 8:33PM, Dec. 4, 2006
while lefarce is harsh in his quote of himself, i myself am a total spelling nerd(im a nerd at all things but especially spelling) i do have to say the spelling is quite atrocious... what i suggesat you do is take the text to some word processor and just do a simple spell check...id even be willing to help you if you want...
lefarce at 8:21PM, Dec. 4, 2006
Yes thank you. Muting me is a totally rational and mature thing to do. Specially since magnus911 gave you a fair review, and a score that reflect APPROVAL of the comic's overall quality. In fact, Magnus didn't seem to have too many problems with it at all. You sir, need to change your diaper. But oh what a wonderful tool the internet is. By selecting "back" a few times, I'm able to catch my original comment, which I will now post again for you to read... [quote]First of all, the statement in the last panel isn't even FINISHED! "well I gess I'll have" Have what? Have to do a jig, have to explain the plot, have to learn how to spell? Which brings me to my next point... I hope you're from another country, cause your spelling is abysmal. "Gess", "Hear", "Thet", Isent"... While "hear" was right, it wasn't correct in the context you used it in. You should have used the word "here". But fuck you, none of those words are difficult at all. You didn't even finish the issue, and your writing makes it painfully clear that attempting to read any additional installments will result in further confusion.[/quote]
lefarce at 8:17PM, Dec. 4, 2006
words* Google Task Bar's auto correct loves to mess with my comments.
lefarce at 8:16PM, Dec. 4, 2006
First of all, the statement in the last panel isn't even FINISHED! "well I gess I'll have" Have what? Have to do a jig, have to explain the plot, have to learn how to spell? Which brings me to my next point... I hope you're from another country, cause your spelling is abysmal. "Gess", "Hear", "Thet", Isent"... While "hear" was right, it wasn't correct in the context you used it in. You should have used the word "here". But fuck you, none of those worlds are difficult at all. You didn't even finish the issue, and your writing makes it painfully clear that attempting to read any additional installments will result in further confusion.
magnus911 at 8:14PM, Dec. 4, 2006
Instead of using the CoM bonus cutscenes, you could've used screenshots from the KH2 teasers/videos(www.kh-vids.net) to make it look better. A spelling error here and there, but those can be corrected, eh? Put "..." if you want to continue what Roxas says in the next comic. It seems like he's been cut-off mid sentence. Quality is good, do you use Photoshop?