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magickmaker on Feb. 25, 2006

This is the first page of my cmic for AP Art. Maybe if enough people like it, I could post the whole thing.

(MagickalLorelai, I apoligize if I've offended you. It was kinda an after affect of when in your review you said I was “Artisticlly where you were two years ago.” I took offense at that and struck back in a way most ungentlemanly. Will you forgive me?)

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Shadow_X at 6:16PM, Feb. 26, 2006

This style is pretty good. I don't know what was wrong with your old one, it was unique.

coinilius at 5:25PM, Feb. 26, 2006

This style looks really good - and the premise of this comic seems pretty cool as well :)

magickmaker at 2:14PM, Feb. 26, 2006

(Whew. I hate to think that anyone is mad at me. THanks for clarifing the "years ago" thing.)

MagickLorelai at 2:05PM, Feb. 26, 2006

What's there to forgive? I should apologize for my criticism in my review. When I said "Artistically where you are two years ago", I meant that I had just the same problems. Most likely, you're going to be better than me someday, especially if you keep practicing and improving. I should have included that much in my post to clarify. Anyway. This page turned out wonderfully, it shows a great burst of improvement overall, and it's attention-grabbing. It begs the reader to ask, "What's next?" which is an excellent hook.

magickmaker at 1:56PM, Feb. 26, 2006

Mr. Anonymous, thanks for the advice, but this is just filler. It seems kinda popular, though, so I might end up turning it into it's own comic.