Ergh, I'm gonna seem like a bad guy for this, but the oposit of what Alex58 said, this isn't good in any way.
1. It makes no seance
2. The lack of speech bubbles could prove to be confusing later on.
3. Your sprites have black boxes around them (I'm confused as to how you over looked that mistake)
4. As Alex said, that's shadow and super shadow.
5. the position of the character keeps moving around the boxes.
some other tips would be to change the colour of the border to something other than bright blue and read some sprite tutorials. Also I'm worried you've named your comic what you meant to name your first page, as your page is nameless and the comics name seems very relevant to this first strip.
eyesoftheblackk at 5:30PM, March 28, 2007
r u gonna catch em all cause your danny phantom?
twinsayne77 at 10:12AM, March 27, 2007
.........could use some work but its still "good" we gotta start somewhere but keep up the work and try some inprovements in the future
Anch0vy at 12:24PM, March 23, 2007
Ergh, I'm gonna seem like a bad guy for this, but the oposit of what Alex58 said, this isn't good in any way. 1. It makes no seance 2. The lack of speech bubbles could prove to be confusing later on. 3. Your sprites have black boxes around them (I'm confused as to how you over looked that mistake) 4. As Alex said, that's shadow and super shadow. 5. the position of the character keeps moving around the boxes. some other tips would be to change the colour of the border to something other than bright blue and read some sprite tutorials. Also I'm worried you've named your comic what you meant to name your first page, as your page is nameless and the comics name seems very relevant to this first strip.
Alex58 at 11:30AM, March 23, 2007
It's... good. But that's shadow.