many things are wrong here
1.Get rid of the white box around the characters.
2. Use jpeg.
3. Make sure the texte settings are on transparent backround (the bubble is there for that).
4. Use jpg.
5. Never use extra nowhere text to describe what a character did, put the actual character doing the action in the background (unless implied). A good story teller never explain what happened.
6.Try to variate the stance of the character from panel to panel.
7. You can make the characters and any other object face the other way.
8. Show the character move, not just suddently pop at another place than it was on the previous panel without any hint the character or object was going to move.
9. Start your sentences with a high case letters and end them with a dot.
10. Register your sprite comic as one.
11. And did i mention it? Use jpeg.
THKNN_NUL at 4:05PM, Feb. 27, 2008
this whole thing is an advenced version of Insonicna. the only difference is that you skipped some issues and are using Advanced sprites.
skybeast at 4:55PM, Nov. 5, 2007
why does this remind me of Insonicnia #4... learn to make your own comic...
giovanni at 4:22PM, Nov. 5, 2007
many things are wrong here 1.Get rid of the white box around the characters. 2. Use jpeg. 3. Make sure the texte settings are on transparent backround (the bubble is there for that). 4. Use jpg. 5. Never use extra nowhere text to describe what a character did, put the actual character doing the action in the background (unless implied). A good story teller never explain what happened. 6.Try to variate the stance of the character from panel to panel. 7. You can make the characters and any other object face the other way. 8. Show the character move, not just suddently pop at another place than it was on the previous panel without any hint the character or object was going to move. 9. Start your sentences with a high case letters and end them with a dot. 10. Register your sprite comic as one. 11. And did i mention it? Use jpeg.
Rage Nakasa at 12:21PM, Nov. 5, 2007
One thing. When useing copy. Click the box that makes it clear...