..You have an author character, first mistake right there. Second, you have no background. Third, you leave the background from the sprite sheet on the sprites, cut it out using the eraser, pencil, or fill tool. Second, bad resizing, really, really bad. Use Sketch/Skew using only increments of 100.
Your text bubbles are either too small (Panel 1) or too large (Panel 3) and have huge, unnecessary borders, and the "Edit" of mecha sonic lacks any shading on the parts you changed. Not to mention you have an incoherent story. Another thing, style mixing. Sonic Advanced style sprites, such as when sonic arrives in panel 3, and the genesis style sprites, such as Espio, also in panel 3, should never be in the same comic unless..well. Unless you can make it work, and you can't yet. And the final thing I can see so far, text bubble tails. They do point to the character thats speaking, which is good, but when several characters are on the screen at once (Panel 3), it gets incredibly confusing and you should probably fill that with a solid color to make it opaque.
At the moment, this is all I can see thats wrong with this comic. If you keep working at it, you could probably turn this into something good, but at the moment, theres no hope for this comic.
BohemianBear at 1:38PM, July 19, 2009
If I could rate this, I would rate it a 10... BUT ITS NOT OPPOSITE DAY SO YOU THEREFORE GET A 0.1 >=(
Reidy at 1:25PM, July 19, 2009
;_;
TheLuigiMan at 1:23PM, July 19, 2009
ogodwat.
Xerinos at 8:09PM, July 18, 2009
..You have an author character, first mistake right there. Second, you have no background. Third, you leave the background from the sprite sheet on the sprites, cut it out using the eraser, pencil, or fill tool. Second, bad resizing, really, really bad. Use Sketch/Skew using only increments of 100. Your text bubbles are either too small (Panel 1) or too large (Panel 3) and have huge, unnecessary borders, and the "Edit" of mecha sonic lacks any shading on the parts you changed. Not to mention you have an incoherent story. Another thing, style mixing. Sonic Advanced style sprites, such as when sonic arrives in panel 3, and the genesis style sprites, such as Espio, also in panel 3, should never be in the same comic unless..well. Unless you can make it work, and you can't yet. And the final thing I can see so far, text bubble tails. They do point to the character thats speaking, which is good, but when several characters are on the screen at once (Panel 3), it gets incredibly confusing and you should probably fill that with a solid color to make it opaque. At the moment, this is all I can see thats wrong with this comic. If you keep working at it, you could probably turn this into something good, but at the moment, theres no hope for this comic.