Just based on the writing, I'm guessing that you're somewhere between 10-13.
In that case, while I'm not really gunning for you to continue, I can at least give you some pointers.
1) Run your script through Microsoft Word and use the spellcheck. No one likes reading "back round," "duesnt," or "wow you right."
2) The green guy seems to move magically without changing his pose. Don't do that.
3) Put an outline around your word bubbles.
CC, give him some slack he's probly new to this.
First off, get better word bubbles and give credit somewhere in the comic who made the sprites, I see 1 sprite that IK needs permission and if you got it from him, I apologize.
In the 3rd, 4th, and 5th panel, the Falcon-kirby disappears and reappears for some reason, don't do that.
I give a 2 because theres no l33t talk
Vagabond at 12:09PM, July 20, 2006
Just based on the writing, I'm guessing that you're somewhere between 10-13. In that case, while I'm not really gunning for you to continue, I can at least give you some pointers. 1) Run your script through Microsoft Word and use the spellcheck. No one likes reading "back round," "duesnt," or "wow you right." 2) The green guy seems to move magically without changing his pose. Don't do that. 3) Put an outline around your word bubbles.
Earthdivine at 10:03AM, July 20, 2006
CC, give him some slack he's probly new to this. First off, get better word bubbles and give credit somewhere in the comic who made the sprites, I see 1 sprite that IK needs permission and if you got it from him, I apologize. In the 3rd, 4th, and 5th panel, the Falcon-kirby disappears and reappears for some reason, don't do that. I give a 2 because theres no l33t talk
Commander_Chaos at 9:37AM, July 20, 2006
Give up making these. They're awful and you're giving sprite comics a bad name.