hmmmm is it just me or is it hard to think of things to say when your writing these things?

anyway… a manga is coming soon im just weeding out all the errors in the plot so once its up please give me feedback i really dont care if say you hate it i just wonna know what people think XD

Hostile Hospitality:
the city, a place of futuristic beauty and potential to win millions, or at least that was how they advertised it. in reality the city of London was a place where gangs ran wild and immoral business tycoons called the shots. when budding journalist is desperately trying to find a story in the chaos that is the city she unearths more then she wished for. as the city begins to lose the last of its humanity. she is is forced to enlist the help of a vigilante group that have been working against both the police and the gangs for the last year. the only problem… this so called vigilante group are nothing but a group of eccentric hotel employees, or so she thinks.

(for a look at my work go to my deviantART page its the same username)