Oh, right, sorry. Derian, if you want to mute my post or report it, fine.
I agree that the sprites are good, but I wonder if you made them.
As a helpful critique, grammar could be improved. The spelling, punctuation, and grammar could use a lot of improvement. An example of bad punctuation is 'Blade of what!!' You should have made it 'Blade of what?!'
Kaze, is there any way at all that I can do to regain my respect? I'm sorry if I seemed a little harsh, Derian. I just have a low tolerance for things that I think are bad. Also, I'm not good at critique either, so I can't really help. All you need is improvement.
So, I'll change my rating to a 4. I hope the plot is good, your sprites and backgrounds are good, but maybe you should spend time re-making your first pages that were bad.
Sorry, but when I wrote that post, I was tired and I had a bad day at school, so I needed to vent my anger somewhere.
I agree with kaze.Mabye derian might not have had a lot of expierence with comics like this.Put it this way when i started making comics i was worse than derian but i've improved.I agree that critscism is good to help the comic but saying things like crap and swearing at him like mad is going to crush him i think if you give him advice not abuse then he could really make a better comic.
I'll give you a 4 since you have great sprites and have put effort into the comic.Also i think that you've done really well putting up with all the crap people have said and still not deleted your comic.
[quote] So many "The Hedgehog" comics.
Luckily, yours is good! [/quote]
You stupid fuck, this sucks hairy balls.
And Derian, if they're in space, they're both DEAD THERE'S NO AIR IN SPACE, YOU DUMB ASS RAPING COCKSUCKING DICK LICKING VAGINA WANKER. I now change my rating to 1. Delete this, please, I and the rest of DrunkDuck will thank you if you delete this.
dark link at 11:26AM, Nov. 20, 2007
Oh, right, sorry. Derian, if you want to mute my post or report it, fine. I agree that the sprites are good, but I wonder if you made them. As a helpful critique, grammar could be improved. The spelling, punctuation, and grammar could use a lot of improvement. An example of bad punctuation is 'Blade of what!!' You should have made it 'Blade of what?!' Kaze, is there any way at all that I can do to regain my respect? I'm sorry if I seemed a little harsh, Derian. I just have a low tolerance for things that I think are bad. Also, I'm not good at critique either, so I can't really help. All you need is improvement. So, I'll change my rating to a 4. I hope the plot is good, your sprites and backgrounds are good, but maybe you should spend time re-making your first pages that were bad. Sorry, but when I wrote that post, I was tired and I had a bad day at school, so I needed to vent my anger somewhere.
omegaman at 1:11PM, Nov. 10, 2007
I agree with kaze.Mabye derian might not have had a lot of expierence with comics like this.Put it this way when i started making comics i was worse than derian but i've improved.I agree that critscism is good to help the comic but saying things like crap and swearing at him like mad is going to crush him i think if you give him advice not abuse then he could really make a better comic. I'll give you a 4 since you have great sprites and have put effort into the comic.Also i think that you've done really well putting up with all the crap people have said and still not deleted your comic.
KazeFire at 11:36AM, Nov. 7, 2007
Despite grammer, pretty cool. I like the sprites. And wow....two users just managed to make me lose my respect for them, in just one post. Gratz.
dark link at 11:21AM, Nov. 3, 2007
[quote] So many "The Hedgehog" comics. Luckily, yours is good! [/quote] You stupid fuck, this sucks hairy balls. And Derian, if they're in space, they're both DEAD THERE'S NO AIR IN SPACE, YOU DUMB ASS RAPING COCKSUCKING DICK LICKING VAGINA WANKER. I now change my rating to 1. Delete this, please, I and the rest of DrunkDuck will thank you if you delete this.
connorth at 7:50PM, Oct. 18, 2007
crap
connorth at 7:50PM, Oct. 18, 2007
crap
dark link at 2:36AM, Oct. 17, 2007
Not too great...some grammar errors...
ManaBlitz at 3:53PM, Oct. 16, 2007
Odd how this updated right before Tony the Hedgehog... So many "The Hedgehog" comics. Luckily, yours is good!