What a really nice and promising start! I'm loving what I've seen so far. My only nitpick is the use of Comic Sans. It doesn't fit. Comic Sans is a font that needs to be killed with a stake, beheaded, and burned. There are many other wonderful, free fonts out there that will compliment this comic's style. Also keep in mind the line spacing. It looks like there's enough room for another sentence to fit in between there, and that tends to be a little difficult for the eye to read properly. Again, look at some free fonts and find something that will work with the art and not against it. This comic has so much promise, and I want to see it succeed! Best wishes! <3
Eno at 1:21PM, Nov. 11, 2015
What a really nice and promising start! I'm loving what I've seen so far. My only nitpick is the use of Comic Sans. It doesn't fit. Comic Sans is a font that needs to be killed with a stake, beheaded, and burned. There are many other wonderful, free fonts out there that will compliment this comic's style. Also keep in mind the line spacing. It looks like there's enough room for another sentence to fit in between there, and that tends to be a little difficult for the eye to read properly. Again, look at some free fonts and find something that will work with the art and not against it. This comic has so much promise, and I want to see it succeed! Best wishes! <3