The text is extremely hard to read--at first I thought it was just a "Mute" comic with a chaotic background.
Maybe some text bubbles or something to show they're talking next time.
Also... the english: "There are so little enemies here," doesn't even make sence. To rephrase in something that might work, "Wow! No hostiles in sight!" I know it's an abbreviated sentence... but in comics you try to convey someone's real language.
Also, you could've done: "Wow! There are so few enemies," which still doesn't sound very good. Also, work on re-sizing your characters... they just kind of blend in with the background.
This comic is great! The 32 bit sprites, the writing could use a little work I'll admit but that shouldn't be too hard. Anyway, I'm adding you to my favorites, this comic is a must read for me.
littlebeast at 8:55PM, April 29, 2006
It's not THAT hard... well ok, it is hard to read. "so few" is better grammar than "so little" but it's ok this way too.
Mettuar_Hunter at 1:18PM, Jan. 27, 2006
Yeah, uh... what they said. But I still think it's a good comic, I really like this.
Tonykewv1 at 1:52PM, Jan. 26, 2006
Yeah, the text is hard, but this comic has alot of potiential. I'll be sure to check in on it.
CORY at 9:35PM, Jan. 25, 2006
The text is extremely hard to read--at first I thought it was just a "Mute" comic with a chaotic background. Maybe some text bubbles or something to show they're talking next time. Also... the english: "There are so little enemies here," doesn't even make sence. To rephrase in something that might work, "Wow! No hostiles in sight!" I know it's an abbreviated sentence... but in comics you try to convey someone's real language. Also, you could've done: "Wow! There are so few enemies," which still doesn't sound very good. Also, work on re-sizing your characters... they just kind of blend in with the background.
WayneEnterprise at 8:34PM, Jan. 24, 2006
awwwwwww.... it looks good
anonymous at 3:33PM, Jan. 24, 2006
i also agree i dont like this one
Shadow_X at 9:53AM, Jan. 24, 2006
This comic is great! The 32 bit sprites, the writing could use a little work I'll admit but that shouldn't be too hard. Anyway, I'm adding you to my favorites, this comic is a must read for me.
Randal at 12:17AM, Jan. 24, 2006
Not to rub it in, but I agree.