Page 3: The Story Begins!
Erhyne on March 29, 2009
I swear you will never see that picture again! This is the last time I'll use it! It was originally for this page, but I liked it so I put it as the chapter title. Without much else to use, it became the top image, too. So, sorry! I'm sure you're sick of it by now.
The good news: we finally hit the story! YAY! So now you get to find out what the heck was going on for the last two pages (six months for them).
Other good news: this will pick up rather quickly, so you'll get relevant story for a long time (I seriously have no room for filler, here, except on extremely rare but hilarious occasions).
Now, for the page itself…
I enjoyed making this page alot! I use a comic program to put the panels, speech bubbles, and such in. However, this process shrinks the page considerably. I'm trying to figure out how to make them bigger (I'm sad you all can't see all the details) but for now these will have to do.
As always, suggestions are welcome!
Thanks for the suggestion, earlier! I'll work on the shading!
^^
It also might have been that I did all the artwork seen so far in one day, so I was tired of shading and kinda scribbled…
Won't happen again!
TheFlyingGreenMonkey at 10:45PM, April 15, 2009
It looks good to me. Its a little blurry but other than that fine.
Erhyne at 10:06PM, March 30, 2009
Thanks Whirlwynd! AH! Blade! I need you put you down somewhere as my editor! xD I'm no good at figuring this layout out... I stink at computers.
BladeSingerXIV at 10:03PM, March 30, 2009
Whoo, I'm looking forward to seeing how this comic develops. Even if I am helping with it...
Whirlwynd at 9:59PM, March 30, 2009
Intersting concept -