Ok... whats wrong with this one is the text mainly. I really couldnt tell who said what. The lines drawn to the text didnt help any. And some of it was almost unreadable. I'd sugest textboxes and more orginization of text. It'll turn out a lot better if you use text boxes.
the2pacfan47 at 11:11AM, April 2, 2006
Ok... whats wrong with this one is the text mainly. I really couldnt tell who said what. The lines drawn to the text didnt help any. And some of it was almost unreadable. I'd sugest textboxes and more orginization of text. It'll turn out a lot better if you use text boxes.
Saber Knight at 2:53PM, April 1, 2006
I give it a 4.5.
Saber Knight at 2:53PM, April 1, 2006
I didn't say that!