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Little Swan on July 10, 2009
Everytime I draw the narrator, she looks different. And Granny is still wearing her slippers.
Three questions this time!
1- Does Granny look older now?
2- Is the text easier to read?
3- Does the shading show up clear enough?
Feel free to add more advice. Constructive criticism always welcome. I hope you're well, and thanks for reading!
Expect another update Monday.
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charlie_everyone- I am truly, truly honoured. You have no idea. Thank you.
Tommym- Practice and determination is right. And the ability to keep at it, even if it kicks you in the teeth. I am working on these things. Let me know if ever the writing is hard to decipher, and I'll rectify / translate. I suppose it makes sense for a Catholic school to split boys and girls at that age, because of their beliefs (however I personally would never survive in an all-girls environment). You didn't miswrite, don't worry. I hope they can get the answers right too!
tommym at 1:07PM, July 12, 2009
Dear Little Swan, "This is a two pipe problem,Watson" as Sherlock Holmes often said to his friend. Thanks for your reply,Love them, as always. I will comment, then PQ you. Is that's OK? I often wished we had girls in our class.I was told it would be distracting.Maybe so, I think however, that belief system's side effect is "stunted social developement." I didn't mean any thing about your young grandmother execpt that she looked young. A bit less wrinkles on her face would be better. The background shading seems OK but may I sugest, a bit darker on the outlines of the people or say the chair legs.about as dark as the paragraph above.This is only my opinion,You might go to my profile page and check the comic recomended covers of "Reverse Polarity"by Aghammer "The Hub" by Hyena " "'Eve's Apples" by Pinkbatmax "Avieness"by Avie and of course "Puppets and Strings" by Emma Clare I think it's called greyscale.In any case I need to go to this meeting ,will try to PQ you tonight Goth Forever! Tommym