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Little Swan on July 18, 2009
I really don't like how the bottom bit came out, and I also think I need to work on the language, I think I'm losing my grip on it. Hm…
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Emily Elizabeth- She should! D: Let's hope so. And thank you so much, it's positive feedback like that that makes me want to keep updating even more. I'm glad you like it.
Tommym- You're right, of course, and he isn't. In what way isn't he? All shall be revealed soon. Glad you can't wait, I hope the suspense is good and that it is worth it in the end.
Limzee at 1:11PM, Oct. 24, 2009
He is a creeper! Throw his creeper-self out of there! D=
tommym at 6:31AM, July 21, 2009
Dear Little Swan , Well it's clear he did not show up just to see Grandma. He came to test our young narrator.(you) "He caressed my wrist with a hot tongue" I am of two minds on this. #1 You are bringing out the erotic side of Gothic Literature,which is all well and good:) and #2 Yuk! You creepy old man get off my arm! Now! Or I'll get my boyfriend. Page is more than okish it's good. I love the way story Is going:) Tommym
Emily Elizabeth at 6:14AM, July 19, 2009
Ahhh he's sooo creepy! Urgh, he seems like a real slimeball. D: Poor girl. What an uncomfortable situation!