all in all the character sheet is very well done, the only problem i see is that if you have more than one neutral elf, you obviously dont want to put the same information down and i think readers will appreciate the seperation, but everything else is relavant and well written towards the character
This has promise! I really like your artwork (even though you think it's crappy). I think you'd benefit greatly from inking over your pencils (Microns are a great brand and fairly cheap at hobby stores). It'll make everything look a little sharper. That being said, the addition of color is very nice! So yay ^.^ Keep up the great work, you two!
Hehe ok, thanks for the tip. The other two are more properly described, its just really important to know what neutral elves are to describe Alaina properly. ^.^ We might give a better short description on wednesday, but most of the character will be brought out in comic. I hope I do it properly. XD
Seems like an interesting character sheet, but perhaps it would be better to have more about the character on the page and have information about the ctual race on a seperate sheet, just a thought but i just wanted to read a bit more about the character!
After this week we will be continueing the once per day updates however wednesdays will take a break from the main storyline for what we will call fill-in-wednessdays, where i will post something that explains the story or will be fan art that may or may not come in. Enjoy a character profile! :D
Bobveela at 9:02AM, May 11, 2009
O.O I wonder if alaina will pick up being a priest later too ;) after all blunt weapons are priest weaps... dual class! XD
Biskit Comics at 5:57PM, April 7, 2009
I like that way you drew the boots and hair
Saillestraife at 3:34PM, April 7, 2009
all in all the character sheet is very well done, the only problem i see is that if you have more than one neutral elf, you obviously dont want to put the same information down and i think readers will appreciate the seperation, but everything else is relavant and well written towards the character
amanda at 1:17PM, April 7, 2009
This has promise! I really like your artwork (even though you think it's crappy). I think you'd benefit greatly from inking over your pencils (Microns are a great brand and fairly cheap at hobby stores). It'll make everything look a little sharper. That being said, the addition of color is very nice! So yay ^.^ Keep up the great work, you two!
Alaina Prana at 12:54PM, April 7, 2009
Hehe ok, thanks for the tip. The other two are more properly described, its just really important to know what neutral elves are to describe Alaina properly. ^.^ We might give a better short description on wednesday, but most of the character will be brought out in comic. I hope I do it properly. XD
Saillestraife at 10:24AM, April 7, 2009
Seems like an interesting character sheet, but perhaps it would be better to have more about the character on the page and have information about the ctual race on a seperate sheet, just a thought but i just wanted to read a bit more about the character!
Kohath Star at 5:40AM, April 7, 2009
After this week we will be continueing the once per day updates however wednesdays will take a break from the main storyline for what we will call fill-in-wednessdays, where i will post something that explains the story or will be fan art that may or may not come in. Enjoy a character profile! :D