Prologue #5 [3/27/06]

Dan on March 25, 2007

Unedited version (It says “Wrong arm =(” at the top)

Okay, this is probably the only page that nearly pissed me off. I don't know what happened; it looked easy, finished sketching, looked over for any errors, and after inking it I see all these errors everywhere. The most noticable one would be between panels 1-3. Moto's left arm was hanging onto the gun and then it mysteriously switches to his right arm.

And then I pretty much screwed up the dialogue, too.

Seriously unhappy. =(

EDIT: Damn it, I forgot to set the live date to tomorrow. What a horrible way to start my week before Spring break.