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Luminous on Jan. 3, 2008
Oh this page gave me so many problems, and it still didn't turn out very well xD The anatomy on Sadie in that big panel of her walking is just awful… I was so concerned with getting the cadence of walking right that everything else kind of got messed up.
Also, this is the last page dated as '07 :D
Oh, by the way, did anyone recognise the picture in the background of the last frame back on page four? ^^
Chibi_n_Roo at 10:58AM, Jan. 5, 2008
I'm liking this story so far ^^ It's very interesting, and I have a feeling that it's working it's way into something fantastic. The perspective is a little funny on this particular page, but really, who DOESN'T have problems with perspective, right? Wait, don't answer that. Well, in any case, I'm a fan. ^^ I'll be in touch.
usedbooks at 4:51PM, Jan. 4, 2008
Nice facial expressions. She does look a little out of proportion walking, and the silhouette people are all on a flat line together instead of having depth. But it's not too bad. I like the panel layout and feel. She does seem "alone in a crowd."