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bravo1102 on Aug. 4, 2010

I'm trying to separate the story into chapters about 20 some pages long as if this was the comic serialization of the movie (but with the dialogue literally transcribed) Originally it was in 28 parts but with the pages formatted as comic panels it didn't work. Originally each panel was the width of the page like a movie still. That required a lot of scrolling back and forth and really made page viewing awful.
Dr. Lamitak is the project psychiatrist. Scenes setting all that up were planned and then scrapped as they needlessly padded out the story. With four pictures on the average taken for each panel things got too long very fast.