I really like the art, but the low quality picture upload causes it to be really grainy. Most of us are ok with loading a larger file in return for higher quality graphics. You might also want to research how to minimize the appearance of moire patterns in your screentones. But overall, looks really great.
"You're" instead of "your"- same thing. "You are" is shortened by the apostrophe in "you're."
Nice concept- I'm digging this world. You need to improve the lettering and the spelling errors. You'll find a great blog on lettering here:
http://clintflickerlettering.blogspot.com/
If you fix these things, I think your comic will go from okay to first rate. Change the font at the very least. Looking forward to where the story heads.
timethief at 10:49AM, March 16, 2011
Gorgeous page. That third panel looks like it took ages to draw. Or maybe it is because I'm too lazy to draw crowds...
plymayer at 12:46PM, Feb. 2, 2011
...And, I spy a leprechaun enjoying a beverage!
TheTeenageArtist at 12:17PM, Dec. 22, 2010
i like this comic, and I'll be keeping an eye on it :P
WinterLegend at 6:11PM, Dec. 21, 2010
I really like the art, but the low quality picture upload causes it to be really grainy. Most of us are ok with loading a larger file in return for higher quality graphics. You might also want to research how to minimize the appearance of moire patterns in your screentones. But overall, looks really great.
Lew at 5:15PM, Dec. 19, 2010
"You're" instead of "your"- same thing. "You are" is shortened by the apostrophe in "you're." Nice concept- I'm digging this world. You need to improve the lettering and the spelling errors. You'll find a great blog on lettering here: http://clintflickerlettering.blogspot.com/ If you fix these things, I think your comic will go from okay to first rate. Change the font at the very least. Looking forward to where the story heads.
willgun at 12:25PM, Dec. 18, 2010
friday crowd...
Call Me Tom at 9:09AM, Dec. 18, 2010
V cool!
seanb47 at 5:58PM, Dec. 17, 2010
Is that a leprechaun sitting at that lower left panel?Lol!