This coic's looking to be interesting. :D And along the same lines as Darth Mongoose, you could work on anatomy more, particularly the sizes of their heads compared to their bodies.
Anywho, I'm going to keep reading. :D
Hey, I like the second to last panel. Good to see you experimenting with angles like that. A little more detail in the backgrounds might be worth experimenting with if you're looking for something to improve on.
MuriraRK at 5:27PM, Dec. 23, 2008
This coic's looking to be interesting. :D And along the same lines as Darth Mongoose, you could work on anatomy more, particularly the sizes of their heads compared to their bodies. Anywho, I'm going to keep reading. :D
Darth Mongoose at 1:35PM, Dec. 23, 2008
Hey, I like the second to last panel. Good to see you experimenting with angles like that. A little more detail in the backgrounds might be worth experimenting with if you're looking for something to improve on.
Avie at 12:46PM, Dec. 23, 2008
I can't wait to read more !
amanda at 11:51AM, Dec. 23, 2008
Woot, glad I bookmarked and came back ^.^ Last time I stopped by, you only had the cover/teaser page up! Lookin' good!