Brink - 137
Skulldog on Aug. 28, 2007
Okay, first off, sorry for the downer of a chapter end. REALLY SORRY, but that's how it was originally written, and I wanted to stick with it.
Next, this is exactly where I stopped in the story of the original version of BRINK. I never wrote anymore beyond this scene and page.
Where we go from here is a complete blank slate, it took me awhile to get the next few bits thumbnailed.
Locoma at 7:28PM, Sept. 4, 2007
yeah besides it's not that they murdered them, there's still hope and secrets to be found
Razzy Jazz at 2:56PM, Aug. 29, 2007
Hey, it's a "Real Life" sort of genre, right? Unless Five were to suddenly receive the gift of flight, or something of the sort, it's safe to say those two didn't have much of a chance from the get-go. So while it's not the most climactic chapter in the whole sequence, I definitely appreciate this more than I would something...far out and (most likely) impossible. You're just keepin' it real, literally.