justanothervamp at 8:16PM, Sept. 11, 2007

Awesome ^_^

Jenshin at 11:31PM, Sept. 4, 2007

Okay caught up on this.. Heh I'll comment like I grade my students - Plus - colors! Especially skin tones. Really great. Your expressions are really good too, I can tell you enjoy them. And your characters all have real definitive personalities. I love it. Minus - Seriously, I can't tell how tall anyone is. One second they are towering over everyone, the next second it's the opposite.. I can't tell how everyone is proportioned to eachother, and it doesn't help that your anatomy is somewhat thrown together. I know I'm not one to speak, but you're a better artist than I, so I have higher standards for you. Layouts - boring. But I like the white boarders. Text bubbles - awesome. Flow and consistancy - A whole lot better from the last time I read this. See ya!

Rockster1039 at 6:17PM, Sept. 4, 2007

fav'd

kingofsnake at 10:05AM, Sept. 4, 2007

sooo...no sugar then? Black just means no cream

theorah at 2:43PM, Sept. 3, 2007

I liked the ending to the last chapter, I'm just finding it more and more interesting! I'm really liking the relationship development between DEvin and fyth too, good sdtuffs =D I personally don't mind much about updates...I prefer it if someone makles a good quality comic and just takes their time. And if it takes you a while and I get suspicious, I just check out your website for updsates XD