I absolutely love the artwork, it's beautiful and the layout rocks awesomely. If I had to give some critism however I would just say that the dialogue could flow better. I can't pinpoint specifics things but in general the dialogue seems a bit...'skippy' if that makes any sense, the train of thought seems to skip tracks sometimes. If you just remedy that then you'll prolly have this manga-esque story published for all your fans to buy and read and drool over. ^^
mishi_hime at 4:05AM, Dec. 30, 2006
demonsssssssss........
soliloquyv at 6:55PM, Dec. 4, 2006
Your drawings are really lovely. They remind me of the illustrator Ayumi Kasai. You should check out her stuff :)
TwilightPrincess90 at 9:35PM, Dec. 3, 2006
I absolutely love the artwork, it's beautiful and the layout rocks awesomely. If I had to give some critism however I would just say that the dialogue could flow better. I can't pinpoint specifics things but in general the dialogue seems a bit...'skippy' if that makes any sense, the train of thought seems to skip tracks sometimes. If you just remedy that then you'll prolly have this manga-esque story published for all your fans to buy and read and drool over. ^^
Krensada at 6:02PM, Dec. 3, 2006
I like the art above all else.
Krensada at 6:02PM, Dec. 3, 2006
I like the art above all else.