I was going to have him shout out "STUPID FRESHMAN!" but ran out of notebook paper width, and... I haven't yet read the book.. I've been meaning to do so. It's been on my list for three years now. One day... one day...
Hmm I like the whole vibe of talking about up coming movies, and the violence that pretty much always follows said conversations. However I think maybe you should have moved the punch to the middle panel and ended the strip with your main character shouting a catch phrase from the book...like
"I am Pagliacci!!!!!!"
And of course if you didn't get the quote, re-read the book.
Good stuff though.
Wills42 at 2:21PM, Sept. 10, 2008
I was going to have him shout out "STUPID FRESHMAN!" but ran out of notebook paper width, and... I haven't yet read the book.. I've been meaning to do so. It's been on my list for three years now. One day... one day...
Stuzoink at 8:03PM, Sept. 9, 2008
Hmm I like the whole vibe of talking about up coming movies, and the violence that pretty much always follows said conversations. However I think maybe you should have moved the punch to the middle panel and ended the strip with your main character shouting a catch phrase from the book...like "I am Pagliacci!!!!!!" And of course if you didn't get the quote, re-read the book. Good stuff though.
Wills42 at 5:27PM, Sept. 9, 2008
And... I messed up on the scaling... I'll fix it later... til then.